Dreaming of you in the daylight
Even in the darkness of the night
For when I close my eyes
My thoughts are of you
In the night I saw you
In the window of our house
Right beside you was a
backpack and a crumbled
Up Lay's Potato Chip bag
I couldn't believe my eyes
For it all seemed so real
There was a knock on the door
At the opening there you were
standing right outside my door
We hugged until we fell to the ground
But then I awoke because it was not real
Only thoughts like these come out
In the darkness of the night.
16 comments:
This poem is so sad, like it is missing someone.......:-) Hugs
Such a sad feeling to awake and find it was all a dream.
Haunting...wow
So mysterious. I agree with Niki. It has a dreamlike quality. Like Bernie said, it's sad too.
Hi
Oh my, so intense. I feel the longing, the desire, the grief the hope of what will never be. :-(
Loving you
Gail
peace.....
your poem carry such beautiful feelings...what talent!
This beautiful poem expresses the feelings missing someone you love perfectly. Hugs!
Love that poem... I can feel how much you are missing someone!!
Hi Bernie,
Yes, I am missing someone. Thanks for your visit.
Niki,
The funny thing about this dream was that it was so real. I quess dreams are like that sometime.
Lorraine,
Haunting? Yes, because it seemed so real.
Theresa,
Thanks for your visit.
Gail,
The dream seemed so real. I do have hope that the dream will become a reality some day. I do believe that someday it will be.
Hi jingle,
Thank you for your nice comment. I do apppreciate it. Thank you for your visit.
Hi yonca,
Thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, it is about someone that I miss.
Take care. Smiles.
Together We Save,
Thank you for your visit and taking the time to comment. I do appreciate it.
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